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Post by thebabe20 on Dec 14, 2011 12:37:32 GMT -5
Post all your Favorite DE fanfics here! ;D
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Post by thebabe20 on Dec 14, 2011 13:31:23 GMT -5
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Post by caine2010 on Dec 14, 2011 19:57:47 GMT -5
Very nice! Thanks for the links!
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Post by delena4eva on Dec 18, 2011 7:43:23 GMT -5
I absolutely love your fanfic. ;D  |
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Post by Doppelgänger on Dec 18, 2011 7:55:34 GMT -5
I absolutely love your fanfic. ;D Ah, thanks.  I'm going to try to get some more online soon. At least one chapter today, maybe more. Everything should conclude around Christmas/New Year's. |
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Post by delena4eva on Dec 18, 2011 7:58:50 GMT -5
I absolutely love your fanfic. ;D Ah, thanks. I'm going to try to get some more online soon. At least one chapter today, maybe more. Everything should conclude around Christmas/New Year's. I can't wait to see how you conclude it because your story could go so many different ways! |
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Post by Doppelgänger on Dec 21, 2011 17:22:13 GMT -5
Ah, thanks. I'm going to try to get some more online soon. At least one chapter today, maybe more. Everything should conclude around Christmas/New Year's. I can't wait to see how you conclude it because your story could go so many different ways! I'm working on the conclusion now and a lead in to a sequel if I want to write one. In the meantime I wrote a little one shot that came to my mind and I need a proof reader for it. The reason I need a proof reader is so that I know it makes sense to the reader. It's a rather twisted and convoluted approach, the way I tried to write it, a dream within a dream sort if thing...so it's a little hard for me to know if it's intelligible at all or if people will get lost. Elena is lost and so that's part of the feeling I want to convey too, a little bit of a crazy feel. It's angsty and dark. The general synopsis of the story/one shot is that Elena gets compelled and it's her coming out of the compulsion and how that messes with her mind along the way. It's how I imagine it would be if this actually happened to someone. I really like it, but I want it to make sense and it's so layered I can't use italics or anything to show the dream sequences because well, it's almost entirely a dream sequence, memories and flashbacks with other dreams blended in, and even she isn't aware that she isn't actually in 'reality' until she finally comes back to it. It's about 3000 words. Should I post it here and you guys can tell me how I can make it make better sense or if it makes enough sense the way I've written it? |
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Post by delena4eva on Dec 21, 2011 18:13:06 GMT -5
Definitely post it!
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Post by delena4eva on Dec 23, 2011 20:15:42 GMT -5
At first I was really confused, but it became clearer towards the end.  But I really like it! |
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Post by Doppelgänger on Dec 23, 2011 21:28:43 GMT -5
At first I was really confused, but it became clearer towards the end. But I really like it! Hmmm...well you're getting it from Elena's pov so it was supposed to be her confusion, but is it TOO confusing? |
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Post by delena4eva on Dec 24, 2011 7:47:34 GMT -5
At first I was really confused, but it became clearer towards the end. But I really like it! Hmmm...well you're getting it from Elena's pov so it was supposed to be her confusion, but is it TOO confusing? I understood it. For me, the confusion made me want to read more to find out what was happening. |
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Post by Doppelgänger on Dec 24, 2011 7:56:16 GMT -5
Hmmm...well you're getting it from Elena's pov so it was supposed to be her confusion, but is it TOO confusing? I understood it. For me, the confusion made me want to read more to find out what was happening. Thanks, that helps.  |
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Post by Princess of Darkness on Dec 24, 2011 16:19:44 GMT -5
I like it too.. it reminds me, in a way, of a fanfic I wrote once... I'm not gonna go into detail because I already did recently in the DE thread, (I believe,) but GREAT JOB!!! 
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Post by Doppelgänger on Dec 24, 2011 17:48:16 GMT -5
Is it the one you took offline? I still want to read that. |
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Post by Princess of Darkness on Dec 25, 2011 17:56:32 GMT -5
Is it the one you took offline? I still want to read that.
Yes. I believe it was only the second one I'd ever done. But reading over it, I decided I wanted to change it so much that it would probably have repercussions in the story... so I took it down. That way when I updated it, the updates would actually send out alerts. Anyways, I posted a new chapter like a week ago, I think? Not sure.. but yeah.. |
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i always avoid when its on hiatus here to avoid spoilers
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